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  • DICTION:

    • word choice

    • your task as a writer is to choose the most descriptive, accurate words

    • the words below fail this precept

  • *THING:

    • What's a thing?!

    • What does it look, sound, feel like?

    • this word is completely useless

      • because it conveys little to no meaning

      • because it does not describe

    • see the list below for more accurate word choice:

STEP STAGE ITEM
  • step
  • action
  • procedure
  • task
  • assignment
  • undertaking
  • move
  • movement
  • measure
  • course of action
  • duty
  • requisite
  • responsibility
  • obligation
  • stage
  • phase
  • part
  • period
  • point
  • leg
  • juncture
  • chapter
  • segment
     
  • item
  • article
  • object
  • ingredient
  • material
  • utensil
  • tool
  • instrument
  • equipment
  • appliance
  • device
  • implement
  • apparatus
  • mechanism

 

  • *A LOT:

    • How many is that exactly?

    • this word is completely useless

      • because it conveys little to no meaning

      • because it does not describe

    • it is often misspelled, too

    • it once may have held some metaphorical power,

      • but now it merely makes you sound like a second-grader writing a Valentine

    • see the list below for more descriptive alternatives:

  • many, several, much
  • a plethora, a cornucopia
  • numerous, abundant (an abundance), copious
  • bountiful, plentiful, various
  • profuse, generous, teeming, prolific
  • more than a few, a number of

 

  • VERY

    • overused

    • to the point of meaninglessness

    • see the point above regarding a second-grader's Valentine

      • I really, really, really like you, very, very much!

    • see the list below for more descriptive alternatives:

  • extremely, exceptionally, exceedingly
  • especially, incredibly, particularly
  • dreadfully, woefully, terribly
  • extraordinarily, , remarkably, vastly
  • fantastically, tremendously, outstandingly
  • unusually, uniquely, markedly, notably
  • superbly, greatly, immensely, enormously
  • immeasurably, infinitely
  • *not "way"

 

 

  • REALLY

      • overused

      • to the point of meaninglessness

      • see the point above regarding a second-grader's Valentine

        • I really, really, really like you, very, very much!

      • see the list below for more descriptive alternatives:

 

ACTUALLY VERY
  • actually
  • in fact, in truth
  • indeed
  • in reality
  • in actuality
  • truly
  • certainly
  • essentially
  • in point of fact
  • as a matter of fact
  • as it happens
  • (these last 3 get wordy)
  • genuinely, sincerely
  • thoroughly
  • utterly
  • "very" synonyms:
  • extremely, exceptionally, exceedingly
  • especially, incredibly, particularly
  • dreadfully, woefully, terribly
  • extraordinarily, , remarkably, vastly
  • fantastically, tremendously, outstandingly