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Coherence: In the end, you want your essay to be a unified whole--a strong link chain, if you will.  The technical term for this chain effect is coherence, which points to not only the logical flow of ideas, but also the inter-connectedness of ideas.  In other words, how do the ideas relate to each other.  This is where transitions come in:  they help build coherence.

 

 

No sentence is an island

Poor--or, incoherent--writing is characterized by short, choppy, unrelated sentences.  The writer has not demonstrated any relationships between ideas:  each desert-island-sentence floats in the ocean-paragraph with no bridge connecting them.  Consequently, just like someone stranded on an island, the idea soon shrivels and dies.

Transitions are the bridges between sentences that connect ideas and build a unified paragraph.  Some of the relationships they show include cause or effect, comparison or contrast, emphasis, sequence, and summary.   

When each paragraph becomes a cohesive whole, then we use transitions to connect each of them, too.  In order to build a larger point, we can employ transitions between paragraphs to reference, contrast, or continue a previous idea.

Thus, the final essay represents a series of associations, of relationships, of links--of bridges--between ideas.  Because of this interconnectedness, the writer's thesis is logical, sound, and coherent, and the reader can easily follow the course of the argument, crossing from one point to another.

To carry this metaphor to its conclusion:  transitions provide the valuable infrastructure necessary for a reader to travel uninterruptedly between each of the island-states, and the final unified essay created with them has become like a centralized form of government uniting a group of island-states under one flag.

Transitions provide links between the following:  

  • SENTENCESAlso, the temperature of the oven must be set on high to achieve this goal.

  • PARAGRAPHS: Another reason I dislike Mondays involves highway traffic.

  • SECTIONSAs noted in the previous chapter, the theme of equivocation dominates Shakespeare's Macbeth.

Transitions often come in the following forms

  • SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTIONSsince, because, if, when, although

  • COORDINATING CONJUNCTIONSand, but, yet, or, nor, for, so

  • PREPOSITIONSafter, during, behind, beyond, during

  • ADVERBSonce, never, always, frequently

LIST:

 

ADDITION

additionally, in addition, and, again, and then, also, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, moreover, nor, too, next, lastly, what’s more, moreover, then, first/second (-ly)

 

GENERALIZATION

generally speaking, generally, in general, on the whole, as a rule, for the most part, in most cases, usually, typically, characteristically, naturally, normally, on average, predictably, habitually, by and large, more often than not

 

ALTERNATIVE

alternatively, similarly, correspondingly, in the same way

 

NEW POINT (to a)

with regard to, with reference to, as for, in terms of, now, as far as – is concerned, it follows that, turning to

 

CAUSE

because, since, on account of, for that reason

 

OBVIOUSNESS

obviously, clearly, naturally, of course, surely, after all, as expected

 

EFFECT

therefore, consequently, accordingly, thus, hence, as a result

 

PLACE/POSITION

above, across, adjacent, after, behind, below, beyond, in front of, here, there, next, next to, near, nearby

 

COMPARISON

by/in comparison, similarly, in the same way, in like manner, likewise, by the same token, in a similar fashion, in relation to, in respect of, with reference to, with regard to, a propos, vis-à-vis

 

PROOF

because, for (that means “because”), as, for that reason, since, therefore, thus, hence, evidently, obviously, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in view of the fact, while, seeing as

CONTRAST

in/by contrast, conversely, on the other hand, on the contrast, but, however, although, though, otherwise, at the same time, notwithstanding, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas, but, yet, besides, versus, while, instead

 

PURPOSE

to that end, to this end, for this purpose, for that reason, so that, in order that, intentionally

CLARIFICATION

that is, that is to say, in other words, to explain, to clarify, to put it another way, to rephrase it

QUALIFICATION

may, might, almost, nearly, very, truly, indeed, probably, possibly, conceivably, perchance, maybe, perhaps, always, never, frequently, occasionally, although

 

CONCESSION

to be sure, granted, of course, still, yet, nevertheless, notwithstanding, however, however much, even though,

 

REPETITION

in other words, as I have noted, as has been noted, as noted above, as I have said, in summary, to summarize, in brief, rather, to put it more simply

 

DEDUCTION

then, in other words, in that case, otherwise, this implies, if not, if so, thus

 

SEQUENCE/ORDER

first, second, next, then, finally, after, afterwards, following, at this time, at this point, this time, simultaneously, concurrently, soon,  subsequently, while, meanwhile, when, during, immediately, later, earlier, sometimes, always, never, whenever, now, until now, once

 

EMPHASIS/

INTENSIFICATION

even, indeed, in fact, in truth, truly, definitely, emphatically, unquestionably, undeniably, of course, obviously, without reservation, without a doubt, undoubtedly, certainly, by all means, never, always, perennially, eternally

 

SIMILARITY

similarly, also, in the same way, just as, so too, likewise, equally,

EXAMPLE/

ILLUSTRATION

for example, for instance, to illustrate, to demonstrate, namely, specifically, in this case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, as follows: the following:

 

SUMMARY

finally, lastly, thus, hence, therefore, in conclusion, to summarize, in sum, in summary, in brief, in short, in a word, in the final analysis, on the whole, overall, that is to say, summing up, as accordingly, I have said/proven/shown, as a result, consequently

 

EXCEPTION

but, yet, still, however, in spite of , despite, nonetheless, nevertheless, sometimes

 

TIME

first, second, next, then, finally, after, afterwards, following, at this time, at this point, this time, simultaneously, concurrently, soon,  subsequently, while, meanwhile, when, during, immediately, later, thereafter, earlier, sometimes, always, never, whenever, now, until now, once, previously