In any attempt to communicate, an introduction is an important
first step in exchanging ideas with a receptor. The introduction, as an integral part of a
composition, provides the necessary "warm up" to allow the writer to establish
the writerreader relationship. Not only should the introduction to a composition either
state a thesis (deductive approach), or provide a pivotal quotation (inductive approach),
but it should also show evidence that you are a communicator worthy of the reader's
attention and that you are purposeful in presenting a substantial treatment of a thesis
worthy of the reader's consideration.
Essentially, in all introductory paragraphs, you want to attain
the following objectives:
You should consider the first two objectives as a "warm
up" to prepare the reader for the substantive parts of the composition. The
"warm up" can be presented in a number of ways so that the reader's attention
and interest are secured. Five examples are shown in this lesson.
As indicated in the section on organizational strategies, you
need to establish a means of organizing the composition. In addition to soliciting the
reader's attention and interest, the introductory paragraph must satisfy a third
objective: preparing the reader for the remaining parts of the paper.
Deductive Approach
If you plan to present the thesis for the composition at the
beginning and then explain the thesis in the paragraphs which make up the body, you should
state your thesis at the end of the introductory paragraph, immediately following the
"warm up." Notice how the thesis is stated after each of the five "warm
ups" you have previously read. It is very important that the "warm up" and
thesis melt together to form an appropriate introductory paragraph.
Inductive Approach
If you plan to use the inductive approach in writing your paper,
the thesis appears at the end. To conclude the introduction of an inductive paper, you
should provide a pivotal question at the end of your "warm up" which will be
ultimately answered by the statement of the thesis at the conclusion of the paper. Notice
that the pivotal question technique should be avoided when the "warm up" itself
is a provocative question.